GUYS. This morning I realized that I have never posted a complete story for Fox Paw. After making horrified faces at my computer monitor for several minutes, I decided to amend it.
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Jack looked uneasily at the room, unsure of whether he wanted to sit or stand. No one had seen him slip into the house and Effy had reminded him a few times over that her aunt had fallen deeply asleep in her rocker on the porch, but he still felt at ill ease. Not only could this ruin his friend's reputation as a good young lady (which, admittedly, as already rather shaky) but he would be strung up and fed to the dogs by Effy's mother.
"Look what I found." Effy said, her voice shaky with excitement. She was sitting on the floor, papers scattered wildly around her. Jack could see a faded photograph of her mother, back when there wasn't that marked harshness behind her eyes. Back when she was young and beautiful and looked rather like Effy.
"What?" Jack asked, leaning over to try and catch some of the words written on the old parchment. Effy was clutching them so tightly that they were getting creased and rumpled, the old paper thin as a moth wing.
"It's my mother's diaries. She used to keep tons of them, back when she was my age. I found the boxes in the attic. Have a look." Effy said, shoving the piles toward him. She was nervously twisting around her cameo in her hand. Jack flushed when he saw it. It was the one that had been the talk of the town the week prior.
It had all went down after Effy's mother had found a pair of her trousers. Effy liked the comfort of them, but Mrs. Marlow wouldn't have it. She had burned them in the fireplace. Effy, in an act of protest and retribution, had asked Miss Magnolia to take a portrait of Jack. She had it cast in a cameo and wore it as a brooch in the center of her chest. Her mother hadn't liked that one bit. A very unladylike thing for an unwed girl to wear the portrait of a strange boy on her breast.
"She talks about Reverend Benison! Or, as she calls him, Albert. She doesn't provide many details, but days after their last recorded meeting she quit the convent for good. Nine months later, I was born. I knew it, Jack. He's my father."
Effy laughed and grabbed his hand. Her eyes were bright and sparkling. Jack, himself, wasn't so sure why she sounded so happy. Reverend Benison didn't have the grandest of reputations. He was bound to break her heart.
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Harriet Marlow had been having another miserable day in a vast series of miserable days.
The schoolchildren had been particularly horrid, and had taken to thrown their chalk at her head. They all screamed and told her how much they preferred the sheriff's wife: the young, beautiful, perpetually perfect Elizabeth Lannon. It set her teeth on edge. She had been teaching for much longer than her, but they still continued to stomp on her toes and called her an old maid.
Still, throughout the day her mind was elsewhere. Namely, on her young daughter, Elvira. Last weekend she had shown up for afternoon tea wearing a cameo that carried the portrait of Jack Delaney. Effy's grandmother Dotty had laughed and told Harriet simply not to worry - that she had carried the portraits of many boys in her day. But Dotty, a former Kilkenny Cat, was not the example that Harriet had hoped her daughter to imitate, and she was outraged.
It wasn't just that she didn't trust the boy's intentions, or that since their friendship had bloomed her daughter had grown starry-eyed and sworn off venison, much to the inconvenience of their dinner plans; but the boy was a Were. A creature of the night. No matter how sweet the exterior may seem, in his soul there was darkness. She didn't trust him for a second.
Harriet had her own history of boys who had blackness in their hearts. She knew that you couldn't change them, either.
She thought that her day could worsen no more, but that was before she came home and found Jack sitting on her living room floor with her daughter. Harriet let out a screech, preparing to whack the boy with her stack of notepaper as he stood up - but something gave her pause. The photograph that Effy was clutching in her hand. It was her, when she was young and innocent. And the letters Effy had scattered on the floor, it was her handwriting.
Harriet stared at the defiant expression on her daughters face. The way she comfortably held Jack's hand, who looked like he wanted nothing more than to dart out of the room and never appear again. "Elvira Emilia Marlow, you have some explaining to do."
In Effy's free hand, she held up a letter. It was dated 1849. The year of her conception, when Harriet swore she would never let her daughter find out about her father. "No, mother. You have some explaining to do."
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Jack looked uneasily at the room, unsure of whether he wanted to sit or stand. No one had seen him slip into the house and Effy had reminded him a few times over that her aunt had fallen deeply asleep in her rocker on the porch, but he still felt at ill ease. Not only could this ruin his friend's reputation as a good young lady (which, admittedly, as already rather shaky) but he would be strung up and fed to the dogs by Effy's mother.
"Look what I found." Effy said, her voice shaky with excitement. She was sitting on the floor, papers scattered wildly around her. Jack could see a faded photograph of her mother, back when there wasn't that marked harshness behind her eyes. Back when she was young and beautiful and looked rather like Effy.
"What?" Jack asked, leaning over to try and catch some of the words written on the old parchment. Effy was clutching them so tightly that they were getting creased and rumpled, the old paper thin as a moth wing.
"It's my mother's diaries. She used to keep tons of them, back when she was my age. I found the boxes in the attic. Have a look." Effy said, shoving the piles toward him. She was nervously twisting around her cameo in her hand. Jack flushed when he saw it. It was the one that had been the talk of the town the week prior.
It had all went down after Effy's mother had found a pair of her trousers. Effy liked the comfort of them, but Mrs. Marlow wouldn't have it. She had burned them in the fireplace. Effy, in an act of protest and retribution, had asked Miss Magnolia to take a portrait of Jack. She had it cast in a cameo and wore it as a brooch in the center of her chest. Her mother hadn't liked that one bit. A very unladylike thing for an unwed girl to wear the portrait of a strange boy on her breast.
"She talks about Reverend Benison! Or, as she calls him, Albert. She doesn't provide many details, but days after their last recorded meeting she quit the convent for good. Nine months later, I was born. I knew it, Jack. He's my father."
Effy laughed and grabbed his hand. Her eyes were bright and sparkling. Jack, himself, wasn't so sure why she sounded so happy. Reverend Benison didn't have the grandest of reputations. He was bound to break her heart.
....
Harriet Marlow had been having another miserable day in a vast series of miserable days.
The schoolchildren had been particularly horrid, and had taken to thrown their chalk at her head. They all screamed and told her how much they preferred the sheriff's wife: the young, beautiful, perpetually perfect Elizabeth Lannon. It set her teeth on edge. She had been teaching for much longer than her, but they still continued to stomp on her toes and called her an old maid.
Still, throughout the day her mind was elsewhere. Namely, on her young daughter, Elvira. Last weekend she had shown up for afternoon tea wearing a cameo that carried the portrait of Jack Delaney. Effy's grandmother Dotty had laughed and told Harriet simply not to worry - that she had carried the portraits of many boys in her day. But Dotty, a former Kilkenny Cat, was not the example that Harriet had hoped her daughter to imitate, and she was outraged.
It wasn't just that she didn't trust the boy's intentions, or that since their friendship had bloomed her daughter had grown starry-eyed and sworn off venison, much to the inconvenience of their dinner plans; but the boy was a Were. A creature of the night. No matter how sweet the exterior may seem, in his soul there was darkness. She didn't trust him for a second.
Harriet had her own history of boys who had blackness in their hearts. She knew that you couldn't change them, either.
She thought that her day could worsen no more, but that was before she came home and found Jack sitting on her living room floor with her daughter. Harriet let out a screech, preparing to whack the boy with her stack of notepaper as he stood up - but something gave her pause. The photograph that Effy was clutching in her hand. It was her, when she was young and innocent. And the letters Effy had scattered on the floor, it was her handwriting.
Harriet stared at the defiant expression on her daughters face. The way she comfortably held Jack's hand, who looked like he wanted nothing more than to dart out of the room and never appear again. "Elvira Emilia Marlow, you have some explaining to do."
In Effy's free hand, she held up a letter. It was dated 1849. The year of her conception, when Harriet swore she would never let her daughter find out about her father. "No, mother. You have some explaining to do."
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